crying..???

abbs<3mommakelly Thu Oct 04, 2007 6:25 pm

CRYING
YOU LIE DOWN ON YOUR BED
FEELING LIKE THE WHOLE WROLD ISNT ON YOUR SIDE
THEY’RE AGAINST EVERYTHING YOUR FOR,
YOU ARE THE SOLDIER AND THEY‘RE YOUR WAR.
FIGHT AND LOSE,
PUTTING YOU IN THE WORST OF MOODS.
YOU LOOK FOR A FRIEND.
SOMEONE WITH ARMS TO EXTEND,
BUT YOU FIND NO ONE.
THEY STARE YOU DOWN AND SHAKE THEIR HEADS,
SO YOU GO AND LIE DOWN ON YOUR BED.

YOU WERE FIGHTING,
FIGHTING TO HOLD IT ALL IN,
HOPING THE FLOW ISN’T SOON TO BEGIN.
YOU’RE FIGHTING
YOU’RE DIEING,
THEN YOU FIND IT ALL SPILLING OUT,
YOU’RE CRYING.
THE ONE THING YOU THOUGHT SHOWED WEAKNESS,
ONE THING YOU BELIEVED YOU WOULD NEVER MISS.
IT’S HAPPENING TO YOU.
AND YOU FEEL LIKE A FOOL.
YOU SEE EVERYTHING THAT YOU COULD POSSIBLY DREAD,
SO LIE DOWN ON YOUR BED.

THE ROOM IS SPINNING
YOU FEEL LIKE YOUR SOUL IS THINNING
YOU WANT TO FINISH THE PAGE
BUT THE WORDS, THEY FADE AWAY
YOUR ENDING IS TORN OUT AND YOU LOOK ABOUT,
FOR A FRIEND
SOMEONE WHO CAN FIGHT AND DEFEND.
YOU FIND YOURSELF WRITING A LETTER,
TO MAKE YOURSELF FEEL BETTER.
YOU ASK THEM WHAT WAS WRONG
THEN COMES ON YOUR FAVORITE SONG.
AND ALL SEEMS RIGHT WITH THE WORLD FOR NOW.
THEN WHEN IT ENDS YOU FEEL LIKE YOUR TAKING YOUR LAST BOW.
THOUGHTS RUNNING THROUGH YOUR HEAD,
REMBERING ALL THE THINGS YOU ONCE WOULD DREAD.

YOU SEE SHE WRITES BACK,
THE LETTER’S RIGHT THERE IN BLACK.
SHE TELLS YOU YOU’RE JUST LIKE HER.
THEN THE SCREEN SUDDENLY BECOMES A BLUR.
THE GREATEST COMPLIMENT YOU COULD GET,
SHE GAVE.
YOU NO LONGER FEEL LIKE YOUR TRAPPED IN CAGE.

YOU FEEL MUCH BETTER,
AND AT THE END OF THE LETTER,
YOU NO LONGER FIND YOURSELF FIGHTING,
DIEING,
BUT THERE YOU ARE,
YOUR FACE STRICKEN FROM ALL THE TEARS,
YOU’VE BEEN
CRYING.

this isnt my faveorite poemof mine but i jus wanted tos ee you all thought.

kelly1st Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:24 pm

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

so great!!!so Awesome!!! I'm really speechless
yeah this poem is one of the best poems I've ever read in my intire life and I'm not kidding about that,it's really the truth

You are a great writer Abbey You really are!!! and for the 2nd time,I wish I've known you before,it's really a bliss to talk to a great writer like you.